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Monday, 16 December 2019

Activity 2 day 2

Activity 2: One Small Step for Man [4 points]
Neil Armstrong was an American astronaut. In 1969 he became the first person to walk on the moon.
Landing on the moon is very dangerous. Neil Armstrong must have been extremely brave.
I always imagine that walking on the moon must be like jumping on the trampoline! Do you like jumping on a trampoline? My daughter Laila loves it!

For this activity, let’s imagine that you were Neil Armstrong.
On your blog, write a short poem describing how you felt when you first set foot on the moon.

My poem

As I placed my foot on the surface of the moon, I felt a slight breeze come across me as I walked, therver and therver on the moon, I started to feel warmer and warmer and then I found the warmish spot and that is where I put my flag.


PS I tried to do my best.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Logan!

    Mikey here.

    You've written a really good poem, Logan. I know that poetry can be a bit tricky so well done on giving it a go. :) I like how you've described what you felt; it really helped me picture what it might be like on the moon. If you could, would you like to travel to the moon?

    Bye for now,

    Mikey :)

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